Desire are dangerous

I have been told that my writing lacks "Tang/Zing" and that I should let go of the "good girl" syndrome...
So Here is an attempt!

I am scared of myself
I am capable of so much
Of loving and lusting
Of devotion and seduction

I am scared of my own dark side
From a damsel in distress to seductress?
I am scared of my own desires
To possess, to destroy, to annhilate...

It is all so easy...to entrap you
A mere gaze has you in captivity!
What if i were to caress your lips with mine?
What if I were to whisper in your ears?

No, for I know
Desires are dangerous
So lets just play this game...
This flirty little game...