Okie people...want story ideas...read this and give ideas on what mita should do...best suggestion gets...whatever you want...
"Talk to him once if you don't like him then just reject him!"
Mita was uncomfortable with this...she hated this concept...of being looked at or looking at someone in that way. It is so much better to know people for who they are without having to see them through the prospective angle/lens.
Its pretty stressful to talk to someone with that little piece of information at the back of your head.
It came as a relief that Nidhi had already done the ground work for her. She had already told the guy "everything" -all the things that had stopped others in their track! All the details. After all it was Nidhi's cousin she was talking about.
"I can't reject anyone! Its so cruel to do that"
"Fine, do whatever you want" she could sense the anger in Nidhi's voice
And we all know when a woman uses the word "fine" that means trouble.
"To be honest with you Nidhi...I am ok the way I am...I don't want any of this"
"Fine. All I am asking you is talk to him"
"I am more comfortable emailing"
"Okie will let him know"
"Thanks hon! And don't you get angry with me...you are all i got here!"
"Thats what i am saying let me help you...you deserve so much better...and would I pick someone bad for you?"
"Okie my head is going to swell up now...so i will talk to you later"
She kept the phone down.
She recieved an email from him the next day. He told her that Nidhi had told him everything about her. He was fine with it, after all no one in this world is perfect and everyone has a history. And that he had heard so many good things from Nidhi about her. He wanted to know more about her from her.... At the end of the email. He asked for a picture.
Mita thought about it. Her heart and head both said "No" but for Nidhi's sake she will send him a picture. She wasn't a beauty just average looking...so she took a really bad picture of herself and sent it to him. Hoping he wouldn't be interested after that...after all how much can a guy take! But surprise of surprise he fould her cute! And said how beatiful she looked.
And the email began to flow in...
Now...don't know what to do with Mita...suggestions on what she should do are welcome...and keep in mind this is fiction ;)
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Part -2
He seemed eager to know about her. He had said all the right things. But there was something that Mita could not put a finger on it but something in her being advised her against it...some sort of sixth sense. It had warned her before, but she had supressed it then and the consequence she will have to live with for the rest of her life. She was utterly confused. On one hand was the pressure from everyone around her to get married...she was fast approaching the dreaded age. She didn't have anything special about her...average looks, average finances...and then at the top of it the stigma of...she shook her head to not even start thinking about that....
Nidhi had promised her she told him "everything"...he never mentioned any of it in his emails...only in the first he had mentioned none of us being perfect....
She didn't have it in her to find love again. And everyone else had given up on her...through it all Nidhi had stood by her like a rock...She still instilled hope in her...and after her(Mita's) last attempt had failed...Nidhi decided to step in and take some action and thats how Vivek came in the picture.
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Part 3
"Good Night!"
"Good night, Kev" she looked at the time it was already 7.30 and she was still at work trying to meet the unrealistic schedules that managers promise to the executive team!
She hated taking her work home but she didn't have much of a choice, she shoved the notebook in the bag and headed home, there were still people working...but she was exhausted.
"Good night guys"
"Good night Mita"
"Have a good one"
"See you tomarrow"
By the time she reached home it was already 8.30.
She rebooted her computer, logged into messenger, switched on the t.v. Picked up the phone to check her messages.
You have 2 new messages. To listen to your messages press 11...
The automated voice response continued.
First Message
"Mita, its me (It was Nidhi) its 8 o clock where are you? Nothing particular will call you later. Bye"
To reply to the message press...Second message
"Haan meetu beta, call home...you didn't even call last week (It was mom)"
She calculated the time must be around 7 in the morning in India. Too early to call mom and dad.
She called Nidhi
Her husband picked up the phone
"Hi Nidhant"
"Hi Mita, how are you?"
"I am good and you?"
"I am good too. You sound tired though"
"Kinda, long day at work..."
"Tell me about it! Let me call Nidhi"
"Thanks"
"Heeey!!!"
"Hi Nidhi, got your message"
"Yes, so how is it going?"
Mita knew what she was asking!
"katt rahi hai"
"Kaat maat..so hows it going with Vivek "
"I donno...he seems like a nice guy"
"He is"
Leave her alone Nidhi...she just came back from work let her rest. She could overhear Nidant.
"You just got home? from work you mean?"
"Where else?"
"ok..you know what nidant is right will call you on the weekend"
"Its ok. You tell me, how are you"
"Same old same old. I was talking to my aunt last night and it occured to me you haven't told me how its going with Vivek"
"He emails me now and then and I reply to him. Last week he asked me if i have messenger".
Nidhi detected no emotions in the way she said that.
"You know what, take a few days off...lets go to Montreal..."
"I wish...release hai...and I have to fend for myself", she laughed.
"hmm..we will have to do something about that"
They both laughed.
"Mita, call me on the weekend"
"Alrighty"
"Bye."
"Bye"
She searched for some kind of a quick meal...baggett-tomatoes- she decided to make do bruchetta with cranberry juice.
She longed for a well cooked meal...like mom made.
She worked on the project for a few hours.
What a life she thought. It occured to her no wonder she did not have anyone in her life...where was the time for it? Online relationships was all she had time for!
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Sorry folks totally went of track here...will get back on track soon! This sounds more like vi's life then mita's ;)
Thursday, April 06, 2006
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Well Lets see.
You want a logical story then the next best thing would be to talk a while on chat and email and understand each other. Let them get comfortable with each other understanding what each other want.
And then let them meet. Let the sparks fly!
Punds
P.S. Ok so where do I send the list? Evil grin here!
Ek IPod 1 IMac Pro aur Can you give me a limo or something? And Maybe a date with Vi. Aur kya mangu?
hey Vi
chal babe romance start kar lo ..make a bollywood masala..let her just talk to him a little bit more..iam interested in knowing what is Mita's history:)
cheers
jeenu
Punds Hon (don't mind me, I have picked up calling everyone hon from xyz),
Aren't we being a bit presumptious??? lol
Nice list btw...I don't have a mac for myself...good old dell will do for me...limo bhi nahi hai..ipod hai lekin gift mein mila tha (thats enough to convince you vi garib hai)...date with me? thats the cheapest and only thing I can afford right now...so sure :)) Amsterdam seems like an interesting place :) or would you rather come to Toronto?
Jeenu girlie,
Like I said everyone has a history...it will be revealed gradually...when I write I want to be able to love my characters but the male protagonist is not doing much for me yet...got to do something about it!
vi
................and they lived happily ever after......
Now now...u cant get an ending better than that..
wherz my Merc
LOL Gi,
Let me buy a lottery ticket and then we will see what we can do about your Merc :)
On second thoughts...you failed to follow the contest rules...the q was story ideas...not endings...;)
So no Merc for you :))
vi
Vi
I know. Girls always call me dear or hon but they never mean it. So got use to it.
But I gave u an idea. Let them chat. You can describe how they chatted and then let them meet. I haven't reach the ending yet.
Make it interesting, put a choice. a third person who starts mailing her about work and then they start mailing too. One person has seen her photo and the other hasn't. But both like her. Bhagwaan deta hai toh chappar phaad ke deta hai! Thoda drama ho jaye!
Amsterdam has a wonderful climate Vi. By the time you come, there would be the Tulips in full bloom. Think about it, you are at advantage.
Punds
Hmm mera suggestion hai ki .. - the guy shows the girl's pic to another guy coz he's his best frnd n the other guy is simply smashing - a 6 footah aur Mita ka chakkar ussey chal jaata hai .. n the original guy drinks himself to death :D
This suggestion is only if its fiction for Bollywood drama!Agar .. yeh fiction nahi kuch aur hai or its a serious fiction then they shud chat on net.. then talk on phone .. and then eventaully meet ..to share history geography n ahem .. why not even biology! Wht else ..thts the most boring way to put things .. yahi hota hai .. yahi hoga .. only tht they might find each other's company interesting n tht wud solve the matter for both them n the readers might find - reading wht they share interesting!
PS - tht song you mentioned .. I missed tht blog! Who sang the song .. any more details ? Can't seem to recall it
Punds...and flower whats with the third person???? LOL and flower third person drinks himself to death =))
Thanks though will keep in mind...lets make it interesting...we have 4 story tellers- Jeenu, Punds, Flower and Priya if she is reading-lets all write a story on this and see what we come up with...its not competetion (i am saying this because if it were i would be the last!) but just perspectives!
Anyone game? (please say "yes")
vi
Anyone else is welcome to join in!
Flower the song is...is old 80s song i think...by Irene Cara and goes like this:
....
I got more in me
And you can set it free
I can catch the moon in my hands
Don't you know who I am
Remeber my name
Fame
I'm gonna live forever
I'm gonna learn how to fly
High
I feel it coming together
People will see me and cry
Fame
.....
vi
"at the top of it the stigma of..."
So here is the mystery .. eh ? Now thts a nice way to make at least me curious ..
It would be good fun .. if we'd all written a story on the basis of the first part you provided .. Ok! I'm game. Just that - I'll take a week maybe .. to come up with something ..
PS - template change achcha hai ...
Oops forgot to mention about the song. I'll try to look for it somewhere. If you like it - it must be good. Thanks for the lyrics - they are good.
Hi Flower,
Great! No problem take your time...I am sure it will be well worth the wait...Since I got a head start on this its probably not fair...if you want we can start a new topic and then all of us can start from there? What do you say?
Punds and Jeenu come on be a sport and Join us!
vi
Hi VI
came back after a long time. Let me think over it and write it.
Have you a plot in mind or are we just driving where the road takes us.
Punds
hmm interesting Vi
looking forward for what happens with Vishal oops i mean vivek;)
cheers
jeenu
so here's my 2 cents
She was a lesbian earlier on....then nitya convinced her no no...come on girl...it aint that fun....so now vivek is excited coz...there is a possibility that a threesome is in order...so...vivek agrees...but then wait...lemme think..hmmm...ok story will be continued further....
Okie Punds look forward to it...I don't have any plans...whatever you want to write is fine...creative freedom ;)
LOL Jeenu,
Its Vivek ;) not Vishal :)) Stay tuned...or better still participate :)
Nandu,
Most hilarious story line*...miss your blogs :(
And its Nidhi hon, not nitya (sounds like nandya to me ;)
*Thanks Kiddo needed the laughs
vi
Okie dokie VI
Finished the story and sent it to your mail id. I hope that was your mail id?
I know! I know! I completed it! It seems that you can depend on me sometimes!
Or maybe its just
Am I great or Am I simply great?
Anyways, Can i publish it in my blog if u not interested? and also if you are interested? (in the story I mean)
Aria
Get over those 6-foota? will you. It makes shorties like us feel totally unimportant.
Punds
P.S. So when should I expect you in Amsterdam? Mera likhna bekar na jaye, VI.
Hi Punds,
Yes, got the story (haven't read it yet-just got home!) I will post it on my blog and you can (permission granted...am I great or what :P ) post it on your blog as well (Hardly anyone visits me :(
LOL@at 6 Footahs...Flower, Believe me if the person is right, height is irrelevant...case in point...the picture (as in photo) i sent you (all)
vi
P.S. vi is not that rich...can't afford it...sigh...story of my life!
Let me go read the story...
what picture....nobody sent me any picture...boo hoo.....peyoo...
Nandya-ji
Sorry sorry sorry...
Btw, I was not in the picture!
xyz tha, uska picture dekhna hai tu email karon :))
And where are the Atlanta pics still waiting for those :)
vi
Vi
Do not change the title of the post now. I have linked to this post from my blog and if you change now, my link goes for a toss.
What photo is being discussed?
Aakhir itni mehnaat waste. Aur ek ladki ne taang di
Punds
Ok...I posted it as a new err...post!
Photo? Is se related photo
ki baat ho rahi hai
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